Okay so admittedly these shots didn't come out as good as I had hoped (after all, I'm a newb), but I wanted to post them anyway. I welcome tips on how I can improve these images from any non-newbs!
In the first two I obviously wanted to capture some movement. They were shot with 1.3 and 2 second exposures. You can see how much less than a second makes a big difference - you can barely see people in the second shot. I think I would be happier with an image somewhere in the middle of the two.